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Mr Glutton is going to be surprised.
I like her too
lovely chapter. Who wants to bet on the winner? my money's on the Hulk getting angry faster than the lizard can adapt
Lovely chapter. I have something to say though. Your book is okay. i love the idea behind it and I also love how the plot progresses. my biggest ick though, is the careless use of Ai. please stop it. It'll ruin a good book. It's way too easy to spot, and it makes the story monotonous and very tedious to read. Some of your previous chapters were just a thousand words with every sentence saying the exact same thing in a different way. If you can stop learning on the Ai too much or use it better, the quality of the book will drastically increase.
Don't be silly please
The "system" isn't really your usual system though. If you read and understood the concept behind it, you wouldn't mind the MC being that way. As a matter of face, I don't think the MC likes it any more than you do. I believe he'll find a way around it eventually but for now, it serves good purpose in the plot
moreeeeeeeeee
Huge red flag here bro. He's just being introduced to a star gate. he has never seen or heard of one before. What does he mean by never seeing anything use nine Chevrons before. of course he hasn't
Nice power flexing here. 😎
This is officially second place in my list of scp fanfictions. Also a very nice system you got here too. The plot, the world building....it's all genius