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der_taube8mthKommentiertCh 51 Assassin- der_taube8mthKommentiertCh 42 A lovely night R-18
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- der_taube8mthAntwortet auf Daoist_Culture
- der_taube8mthAntwortet auf The_Lonely_Guy
- der_taube8mthKommentiertCh 3 Idle System
- der_taube8mthKommentiertCh 2 House of Victory
- der_taube11mthKommentiertCh -1 Author's Note
- der_taube11mthKommentiert
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Hi, Welcome to this brand new story of mine. I hope you enjoy reading it along the way. I will try to keep the story entertaining and juicy for you all, but I just hope and will appreciate if you were to take out a minute of your time and post comments at the end of each chapter. It will be a great source of insight for me. - der_taube11mthKommentiert
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Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - der_taube2yrAntwortet auf Xuefang1Ch 125 And it's a company retreat
- der_taube2yrVerschickt
The start ia nice. Hopefully it might turn out to be a good story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht. - der_taube2yrAntwortet auf Fa11enGr1mCh 1 The Nightmare
- der_taube2yrVerschickt
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- der_taube2yrKommentiertCh 64 I'm ready...
- der_taube2yrKommentiert
Now that's some disease.
"It's 'Over the top-hyper imaginative-boredom' syndrome," - der_taube2yrVerschickt
The story may have some similarities with others but the core idea and character's personality looks original. The grammer is way above many. The stability of chapters is kind of OP, I don't think that it will last though. Overall, the story is far better than many with a lot of growth for the characters. I hope the author keeps up with the great update. Good luck going forward.