Trash. It is like a shopkeeper lures you into his shop telling you about all the wondrous things but when you step into the shop, you are served some dog shit. The complete reversal of things and the expectations you had makes your blood boil, your brain cells scream with agony and your heart burn with fury. Those who write these novels should be charged for cell death and brain damage it inflicts on its readers. It is a poisonous concoction of disappointment, expectations, love but mostly hate and hatred.

You lost me here.. too much focus on friends.. pushing everything from money to spoiling them to sharing books to even letting them on his secrets and how powerful he is. Overly concerned about elfs. And things which can be done without reavealing any secret was done in such a dramatic way without any worry.

Sure. I hope you keep getting better. Suggestion- Having details on something non mc related is good. Using few chapters to expand the readers view or just introducing new things instead of the regular plot works well. But you have to keep in mind that we have come to read about the mc, so spending chapters upon chapters on describing something can backfire. Unless it is really interesting. I ll try to read again..hope it will be better

Wow.. the author is taking the criticism very nicely..... And don't mind the harshness. I know where it is coming from... Cause when I read a book i imagine myself as the mc, so it gets tough if the author keeps tossing around the mc. Although I haven't read the book , I always check the reviews before reading. See, any one with a decent head won't tell anyone that they are an alien( not using reincarnator cause not specified) just because they thought that it is a good way to start a conversation. Some secrets are meant to be kept or just there is no need to mention it at all. And people like characters who improves themselves and have a character development in any possible ways in accordance to the world they are put in.

U people want to argue, then argue.. but don't bring racism and ur narrow minded thoughts into any verbal war. First let me ask, by commenting something really mean would you be happy to know that someone that u hardly know is probably upset because of something you said.. be a positive influence on this world.. or just don't do anything at all.. but never be so mean to someone that they may lose their self confidence. I don't understand why u have to be so mean.. there is so much hate in this world, a little love and tolerance doesn't hurt anyone..

The story was good the first few chapters but it degraded to something unreadable in the recent chapters.. some chapters were just too much info dump and the essay like writing made it unbearable read. Had to skip them with just a look

The story was good the first few chapters but it degraded to something unreadable in the recent chapters.

These few chapters i just had a quick look and skipped it. Kinda getting bored with the same things going on and on.. I think you should use a better way to write cause these few chapters it felt like I am reading essay.

Yes the f**k yuri.. any problem? People don't put tags like #starightromance is included so it is completely okay to not provide #gaycouple notice and have some semi story which includes the above. And if u r going to say that not all people like non-straight things, then remember we don't complain and stop reading a book just because it mentions a straight romance.

U doing okay?

What is wrong with bl ? The non straight people always have to read straight stuff. Like who wants to read about a loli being cute. Now u see how other people from the LGBT community feel. But we don't comment on such stuff nd show how much we hate it 😷. This mask emoji that u used pissed me off. Love is not gross. Though we don't hate straight stuff we don't use this type(😷) of emojis to show our disinterest in it.

I get it, I get it. Another book that could have done better than having the mc getting leashed by the women around him. Every other girl is curious about this guy and eventually, maybe in a day or two will become his lover. Very realistic.

I am really not liking this where this is going. As I commented on the last chapter. A guy who was preaching gender equality is treating all the girls in such a non - ken way. That's why I hate when girls gets added and everyone in the comment section keeps screaming add this as his love interest. No no add this as his love interest. Can u please make harem of this, this and this? . *Sigh* I really don't like where this is going. If someone is to fall in love with him and vice versa leave it to the author.. how he introduces the love interest and everything that is needed to make it good. Knowing what will happen is no fun. It only serves u as some wish fulfilment and a way for u to get off. I see no other reason. I am saying this again. This is an adventure, let it be as one and not some wish fulfilment and ur jerking of story. *Sigh*

Please add that there is nothing bad in it. The way people use words make it sound wrong. Like - I was starting get suspicious of you. That makes it sound that being anything but straight is bad.. I didn't mind the sausage fest cause a lot of stories get detroyed whenever girls get involved.. I love things related to adventure and stuff. When I read something that is about adventure, I expect it to focus on it... I have seen hundreds of books that had good character development (that is really hard to find) becoming book revolving around how beautiful r hot the babes are, how their t*ts are hanging like fruits to be plucked. How their jade like skin and otherwordly beauty makes even the strongest man bed over his knees. I had enough of that crap. If people want to read about Romance or harem or whatever shit there is go find those specific books like - Handsome CEO and his secretary or whatever. Making every story a smut story because some teenagers can't get off from **** that is very easily available is such waste of imagination and creativity. I might be ranting but I just wanted to point it out cause every book i come across is the same old shit. I like this story cause here the character is someone i can relate to. He is trying to get stronger and is out to live his life as an adventure. The last chapter the girls got added and very first thing they do is make demands after demands and the mc being helpless as he tries to seek help from his crewmates. This scene, I have seen in a lot of books.. this easily goes to where the mc is weak and forgiving to girls just because they are girls. Anyway I am off. Ciao.

I don't get why he had to say it out loud to every guy out there about powers and that he will have powers.. dude that no longer will be a secret that u r the newly appeared hero if he keeps having that big mouth. And 16 yrs of his life he was just feeding homeless people? Nothing more?

Thank you. I will try to read it again.. I am just too bored at home and not being able to find good books to read is frustrating.

Umm. I still tried to read one more chap to see where it goes. But no.. enough.. I am really done.

It was going so well. And u had to destroy it with the involvement of the girl.. too much affection for someone from the abyss. I quit..

The story was chunky from the very start... Everything seemed okay but it still felt so odd.. and I get that u r straight and like chicks, but every scenario of the girls had to much of praising beauty for every little thing.. like - she is breathing and every breath that she exhales makes her beauty much more prominent. Did u get what I said above? If u didn't, so did I. I could not understand the need for such irrelevant and overly used details. .

I am done with this book.. girls come popping around like berries in a garden. His every friend is a girl. His childhood friend is a girl. His sibling is a girl. He saves people who in all coincidences are girls of his age. He fights with an opponent who is slightly above their peers and puts up a good fight, is a girl. I understand that he is straight and all.. and u r taking the harem route.. but for logic and everything that is rational sake one person can't be surrounded by just girls their entire life, from birth to childhood.. u r too obsessed with girls that u lost ur logic somewhere in some forsaken land. And then there are a few potholes that I tried to ignore.. anyway...