SerialReader19

whats the point of saving 5 times, just let him do what he wants

man, you could make zachary have more personality, right now he seems so dumb, like he is a person who was reborn, he should have a plan in mind.

feels like a novel written pre-2010. feels so out of place and full of cliches in just the first few chapters. couldn't continue reading till the end of first volume.

can someone explain what talents are

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Liked this one better. Earlier novel was more of a monologue or talking to bots. this time, it feels better laid out. waiting for more. Good work

thanks for the chapter.

Eddie is the best gossiper in town

should have punched the nose

rich smh