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I think ur story is already better than the majority of total drama fics, especially the cody ones. I'd like it if we could have more focus on whats going around Havoc instead of what Havoc is doing or what others see Havoc doing. I know its supposed to be an op character, but the ai layed it on too thick. I'm excited for future updates.

i like it so far. the writing style is a bit heavy though and there is way too much focus on the mc.

"workers"

didnt this guy get arrested for a dui and the body cam showed his agent lady trying to get the police officers to let him go in exchange for autographs

Ashley? Who tf is that?

If you are going to translate a novel, at least take the time to highlight everything and unbold the bolded words. It ruins the experience. I've come to associate randomly bolded words with bad translations. I'll give 3 stars because I haven't actually read it and 3 stars is average in my opinion.

its chinese translation. this Zhongshan dude is nakayama takuya

who?

I believe the poem is saying 3 things: -The uncle only wishes him well when the tides are in his favor and things are going well. -Not sure for the horse part, but it might be referencing a baby horse barely being able to walk or sating that the uncle is only fit for servant work like how a horse pulls a carriage or a criticism about how the uncle is fully capable and shouldn't be trying to mooch off the mc since its not like the uncle is disabled as the horse has all 4 legs. -The uncle has an ugly personality and has eyes too greedy and is trying to bite off more than they can chew as the eyes are big but the mouth isnt.

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