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It is a really good novel. I like it!

I love it. Well done, Author.

She will be in it. In a major way. But you just have to teust the process.

I didn't use kilgrave as an inspiration. I just wrote this chapter on impulse. The dinner was from when Beck wrote a poetry about her father and everyone in her study group liked it. Joe was planning to take her to an expensive place, but peach stopped them by calling beck to her. I will try to show it to you in the next chapters.

I really just wrote this on impulse. I know who kilgrave is, but i have never seen his movie. I just was writing this chapter then thought just to make annie kill herself in front of beck. But i just changed my mind and wrote this.

He is letting the girl PLEASURE her. That's it. And, i want you to know something. Even though he is a psycho like Joe and they fused, this is still an OC that i created. So there are some differences.

Let's just say.... he was a genius with 700 iq. Yeah, let's do that. It's not for plot purposes. I swear.*cough*

First let's clear up something. When i said he will not sire any vampire i meant he won't give his blood or directly transform someone. Alice is the first to be sired by his blood directly so she will have adavntages over the others while her sires will be better than other species but still weaker.

Then leave. Who cares.

He only sired Alice to help him. The others are sired by Alice.