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Dark Soul Difficulty Stories: Shadow Slave, Sword God in a world of Magic, Reverend Insanity.
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THANK U FOR NOT FLOODING THE STORY WITH NSFW. I came here for the adventure, I don't mind if there're s*x scenes, but don't overdid it and have it impede the telling for the rest of the world. The world is wide, and our imagination is wider. I always love fantasy worlds with a massive and intricate balance to its machination.
this is smart… the approach of Reverend Insanity. "These kind of threats don't work on me. kill him and I'll kill ur entire family and relatives too. or die here and your family won't get implicated."
out of all the 3 novels… this one is definitely not better than the brotherhood. so this is between 2nd or 3rd. simply cause i know nothing about pokemon, and the novel was just a massive info dump in the opening. so i think this one is 2nd. the story is readable, but the plot is not eVen close to the one piece one. it's just about a kid who master all things in no time and i mean to a degree of grandmaster fuinjutsu, medical comparable to tsunade, all in the span of 1 and a half year. seemIngly out of the books from the clan's help. Great. if this story doesn't end in 200 chaps, 300 at most than i don't even know wht kind of filler the author is putting in.
Ohh this is getting good… we seat through the pov of the Don.
Yea… his father is not a bad guy, he's just too hopeful in people's nature. So much so that he disregard his own safety. it's a dark place where goodness goes to die.
with that future knowledge he will know what to do and how to train best. so saying it's "nothing much" is just bs.
bruh… this paragraph comes right after author belittle the MASSIVE advantage future knowledge gives. Stop contradicting with yourself. There's no need to downplay his edge with his past life experience. instead use it as a reason why he works harder cause he had tasted defeat, failure, and all that life can offer to a life of tragedy. these narratives would be better than saying "no much use of having future knowledge if my goal is…" even ur comments instantly point out how dumb that notion was.
nothing much…?? great. now let's make a new character without his past memories.
So… world events the same means his future knowledge is now different.
much much much much much so much