Rudranarayan_Nanda

I don't like most of system who give gifts like come on Superman still needs gift???he just have to work hard when he unlock some powerful Superman abilities he can literally kill thanos

Come on bro just make him first in the class. think from the view point of mc he got 7th place in class of kids of age 11.He is a mature adult bro. And what kind of logic is this that i know the answer but i won't write it.

Ohh shut up will you

He should be first in his class. Why don't he gives much attention to magic theory?? That's the thing needed to develop magic or make your own magic. Will he just practice existing magic became strong then became an auror Or something after graduation?? Nothing new

Everything is good except romantic relationship of mc it starts too early, I mean too too early. This a fan fiction and mc likes the original character but still he is going out with a girl at the age of 11. I mean what the fuck bro(talking to author)

A matured man liking a girl of 12yrs that's creepy bro not romantic, how much you love a character doesn't matter because because she is still a kid not even 14-15.

He took love intrest in a 5year old girl with 20 yrs old mentality. I think he is sick

Nice chapter, but i don't know when will it end though

Author what happened to "my hollywood system" novel again why no updates

Author don't you drop this novel it's pretty good