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tftc

why did he not revive tien and others. wasn't this arc meant to revive them?

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I love the Writing Quality and the story very much.It's just the fact that when the POV changes to Harry, it feels too slow as we don't get to see the MC much , specially in the last arc and this feels frustrating.

Truly the greates masterpiece I found here. It does not matter if the story seems slow and you may not agree with the character some times. I think it shows the character development. There were some parts wher I felt the story to be slow but looking back i think it only added to this beautiful masterpiece. Being on a high every chapter will probably feel stale for a while, but this pacing , character development and above all the consistent updates made me in love with this.

Can't wait for more[img=recommend]

Great work as always[img=recommend]

You are going to kill me ..... More chapters please[img=update]

Alone

The chapters are too short