BlackSnowAngel

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Not a bad story at all. great development and a good pace. Its still in the beginning stages but that's fine. There is a lot of potential to the story.

thank you for your honest review. i really appreciate it.

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Very pleasant story to read, something worth taking a moment and checking out. If you are bored and have some time. The chapters are quick pace and smooth. It isnt too long at all. keep it up.

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the story have a nice flow to it. it is easy to read, fun, enjoyable to pass time. peronsally, the first chapter was a bit slow for me, but when you get past that, its gets much more enjoyable. I recommend this story if you are interested in gaming type of story.

A gaming type of story. I enjoyed it. Even though its only a few chapters, i can see the potential in the story. There are a few grammar mistakes but those can be fixed. I like how quick and easy the story is to read and not to heavy. its a great start. keep it up

What i like about this story was how sweet and conise the story moved. It did not have too many stumbling blocks but it was pleasanr overall. I do would like to see a bit more showing at certain times when he feels, other than that its a nice reincarnation story. its only just started but the possibilities is endless.