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except we know the gaurds could ID the demonic aura since its the first thing they said to the MC, so it doesn't make sense that all these high level people aren't stopping the fight after seeing the demonic technique/aura
probably refering to chaps like you'd picture a cowboy wearing
a group of 7th and 8th to capture someone who told you they were in the 9th level... truly the special kind of stupid you expect from rich families
"you're better off just rubbing sand in your wound" Pale: That is a great idea!
I would like if you could add more details about the world. For example i can't really follow Thomas's guess about whats going on as i have no real idea about what demons can or cant do and how demons compare to the average student (like does it take only one person to fight a demon or is the whole 5 man team needed?)
"Give him time and maybe he'll forgive you" proceeds to spend time with her alone which is what lead to you guys ruining your relationship with mc
Have we not gotten the name of Cynthia's husband or has Van just not cared to remember it?
What has she done that's bad? She's saved Max's life, is helping save his mother's life, and likes max. That's all she has done, what about that makes her the worst?
i really dont like xun's betrayal coming out of no where. While we have been shown that she cares deeply about tian, she has also been shown caring alot for long chen. This feels like a plot twist the author wanted to make, but couldn't find a good way for it to happen and sacrificed Xun's character just to facilitate a tian vs long chen conflict when it doesn't feel needed or properly hinted about.