ClemSama

depends if the traits are retractable , if they are definitly wings : i mean who doesn't want to fly , if not while its cool , can be burdensome

the secret identity is starting to get borring , this isn't fuc..ng Marvel or Batman , its annoying , i personaly hate MC that hide their face , its not chinese cultivation novel

well , could be an interesting story , but everything is way too vague , we know nothing about the mc , i don't like the fact that its been 20 chaps and we still don't know what his devil fruit is , maybe we will get it by chapter 50 but i won't wait that long , its not bad writing but not enough to be invested

yes but that was not the point , what i meant is there no invisible coating stage in Haki : its directly hardening wich is invisible for people with no Haki , the author in this make it like that : invisible Haki then hardening then emission wich is wrong

sorry that was for the chap before , no idea why i have put it in this one

Can we have at least one fanfic where the mc is not a fuc..ng Duck , is that so hard to make what you want with your own money , why do someone else get any say in where he use his money , its incredibly annoying : i really really hate beta japanese mc , good way to ruin a fic

man this is taking forever , i honestly don't get why he did not just decapitate him at the first strike since the other believe the attack would not work , and now its draging forever for an opponent that should not be one at all

what's his devil fruit , in this fic , orginally i though a normal zoan because of the wings , the hypnosis being a skills that does not need a df (strange power exist in One Piece like the girl form baroque works with the Paint) , but now i'm guessing a myhtical zoan bird type : there a quite a few with mind control skills love the fic by the way

so many prob with this fic , 1 how the fu..k de he go to skypia ? so he unite the skypian & then what ? no fight , how does he know about Law ? is he a reincarnator ? and finally what is his devil fruit : Paramecia / Logia ? man it been 10 chaps and i foresee a lot of prob

in our world too buddy