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Kinda grey? Brother, it should be "kinda gay"
the massive rants were fun to read
they would but at least they can't sell them to the aliens
the clan would have covered the costs, so doing that is one of the dumbest things that could happen since those mechs would be fighting for Davute, and not the clan
He probably won't and think it's the state being the state
Damn, this sounds good can anyone help me find the raw? asnkdkando;ihsdadnhl;akal;sjhdn;loaknbl;kncl;ksnda;olsj;oajl;oajal;ksnda;ldjhao;piwhaoi;sfhbsliufhgsiohakol;dnamsn
I dub it the annahilator inator
Damn bro, anyone found the sauce? Ossoospssopssslslslsssllssldlsllsldldldldldldldldldlslslslslsldldldldldldldldldlslsllsslssslslsslslsslelsl
The beginning of the crusades!
Some paragraphs are cut in half, I guess you can bring that up to the guy who's posting the chapter. Would be nice if you touch up certain sentences or stanzas on their grammar, don't get me wrong, they're decent but could be a little bit better. Happy to see no grammatical errors so that's a plus Keep up the good work man
jesus my dude
maybe you could go for the other "head" hehehehe
The development of the story was pretty good until it reached the most recent chapters. especially the last few chapters before the Author went MIA, they could've been done a lot better(plot development-wise). Although the "Harem" tag isn't present from reading the raws, I'm getting the "harem" mc vibe.
I thank thee for the raw name