Dragon_Nexus
Lv2
I slack off at work writing about the stories I go to sleep imagining at night... English is not my native tongue.
2019-11-30 BeigetretenRomania
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Dragon_Nexus4 years agoAntwortet auf Harem_fanActually made me laugh out loud. Talk about a shitty situation
- Dragon_Nexus4 years agoKommentiert
This is good, but could use some polish. Some pros: - Sentence structure is excellent - Premise is not forced - MC is very relatable Some cons: - His parents seem kind of scatter brained, especially his dad. Supporting characters should be just as relatable as the MCs.
- Dragon_Nexus4 years agoKommentiert
The name's Tonic, Jin Tonic.
