DarkSeid
You may live to witness my triumph. Live -- to witness the darkness transcendant... and your ultimate, undying doom
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DarkSeid11dKommentiertCh 8 The Man In Blue.(1)- DarkSeid24dKommentiert
Oh come on, from beginning again. Oh well fine but please don’t do it again cuz this is getting tiring.
/ My Compromise \ - DarkSeid27dKommentiert
I hope you do it on my bday. 15th May
Mayhaps even sooner, we will have to see. - DarkSeid27dKommentiert
Noooo, I’ve waited too long. Just do it. I trust in you nd so far, it’s not perfect but it’s actually really good. Just ignore the haters man. If you don’t like the chapters cuz you made a mistake or something, just keep updating and edit it next day when you’re available.
Should I make a small 1 month hiatus to try and resolve this fanfic, meaning I will go back and re-work some chapters, trying to carefully build a story line instead of simply going with the flow? I need help with this. - DarkSeid1mthKommentiertCh 5 Meeting Of The Strongest.(1)
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Bruh
It's something he hates himself for but is also thankful for because he never wants to be the loser that he was in his previous life. - DarkSeid1mthKommentiert
Vampires don’t bleed. Please correct this
The vampire, sensing that this human was unlike any it had faced before, adapted its tactics, feinting and using its supernatural speed to try to outmaneuver Ethan. But Ethan was relentless, his mastery of Krav Maga allowing him to anticipate the vampire's every move. He landed a series of punishing blows, exploiting the creature's vulnerabilities and forcing it to retreat, blood oozing from several wounds.detailThe Eternal Traveler: A Journey through Twilight and BeyondAnime und Comics · Story_Teller_229 - DarkSeid1mthKommentiert
The bear got limited lifespan bruh
Despite the challenges of living in the wilderness, Ethan had never wavered in his commitment to training Armageddon. Even as they moved from one location to another, Ethan had made sure to continue their training, finding the time and space to work with the bear no matter where they were. Armageddon had become an essential part of Ethan's life. He would bring the bear with him whenever he changed his location. He would carry him on his shoulders while swiftly running in the forest.detailThe Eternal Traveler: A Journey through Twilight and BeyondAnime und Comics · Story_Teller_229 - DarkSeid1mthAntwortet auf Sohioe
I know what you mean. I gave up on my fanfic too because of boredom and to the fact that I have so many ideas to the point that I just couldn’t be bothered to write anymore cuz it’s too much effort. It’s exhausting. Well, I hope this turns out well. Good luck
Ch 1 The First Son. - DarkSeid1mthAntwortet auf sixpathsofsimp
Fashoooo😂😂giving me bad vibes bruh
"You all seem to be missing the point," The most vain of clones finally spoke, "Why should we allow our perfect self to be destroyed when we can create immortal clones? Think about how clones are made, chakra. Why are they destroyed easily? Because attacks disturb the normal operation of a clone's chakra. What if we can keep our chakra undisturbed? What if we can reconstruct it at a moment's notice?" - DarkSeid1mthKommentiert
Yes. Thank god
"And what if we do join a league?" Kai asked, mirroring Yuze's stance. - DarkSeid1mthKommentiert
I don’t like this comedy shi.😅😅 It ain’t funny to be honest. Just saying. And this main character is too passive for my liking. I hope he speaks up. How is he not being suspicious to these character if he’s not acting up? Too quiet
Kai was still frozen. He couldn't believe his first kiss on the cheek came from a guy! He pursed his lips and dejectedly looked down to the ground as his fantasies of a first kiss were now shattered. - DarkSeid1mthKommentiert
Plot armour but whatever
Yuze didn't know how to feel about this certain player. He couldn't deny that his physique for his age was one of a kind, but he felt that something was....strange about him. - DarkSeid1mthAntwortet auf Its_Praveen
Are you from India by any chance?
Onions. - DarkSeid1mthKommentiert
Yesss, thank you for the update
INTERLUDE - DarkSeid1mthKommentiert
Why don’t you use quotation marks? This is weird.
- Don't be silly! - shouted Tsunade - Raise your head! You need to rest! - she rebuked her. - DarkSeid1mthKommentiert
I have a bad feeling☠️ This mf ain’t coming back. I’ve seen this
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