StaringCat

One Piece: The Visionary of Impel Down (COMPLETED)

I just wanna make a few things clear: 1. MC’s name. Yeah, I know, it's Chinese, but it’s literally the only Chinese name in the whole story (if you see another, do tell me). I was too lazy to come up with something else, so… that’s what you get. 2. Plot. Just a heads-up: this story was finished waaaay before the current One Piece plot. So don’t expect it to line up perfectly... or at all, really. 3. Complaints. The only kind of feedback I’ll actually respond to is about the writing (like grammar, translation, etc.). Anything about the plot? Nah. I’m not touching that. I didn’t change a single thing. Last thing, don't expect some high quality translation/writing. At best, it's better than MTL. Thanks for reading, I guess. ______________________________________ Here's the synopsis: Luo Ning, who traveled to the world of One Piece, was listed as a pirate and thrown in Impel down because he kills some corrupt Marines. At the same time, the system wakes up. Since then, Luo Ning has become the freest man on the sea. ______________________________________ MC's power is Visionary from Gremmy (Bleach). MTL Title: I, The Freest Man On The Sea. Original Title: 我，大海上最自由的男人 Author: 沙漠咸鱼