Deen_Ace_

Your progression and story telling is way to rushed and crude.the way you started the story was nice but your follow through doesn't feel worth it at all....

hey dude do you have problems with addressing gender or wot???You call boy she/her n girl he/him... like seriously wtf??

Beautiful story.. .Addictive and completely worth reading

Completely worth reading. .. beautiful story

enjoy my foot you lazy bum

nice day my foot .....more chapters fast

Nah.. I'll pass the new cover looks lame

you hardly release single chapter a day and still asking shamelessly for votes....

fix your grammar dude .... seriously man u mix the genders half of your writing doesn't make any sense..

Man u r calling a guy she and a girl he...hard to understand whom u r refering to with ur way of adding multiple names in a conversation