Uchiha_Lover21

The story is meh. The idea to become mercenaries when you were just told you'll essentially be hunted is not even close to the smartest idea. And Yuki despite being 35 acts like she's a teen. I was expecting more maturity. Also I don't enjoy right off the bat him being reincarnated into Yuki's path. Its kinda interesting but it doesn't fully grab attention.

There it is. I hate the whole disguise troupe. Its overused and boring, and most of the time useless. In this case, the only thing they'll find out if they investigate him is he's Nyx's disciple. How they'd find out his true origins I doubt there is a way. This was actually interesting but im tired of reading ever character being disguised when its not even really necessary.

Yeah, I cant very bothered to read this if that's how its going to be.

The only thing I dislike and is that he's like a sociopath. I don't mind evil mc's but I especially dislike mc's who manipulate women and don't seem to develope feelings for them. He seems like the type of mc who cares about no body but himself. Thats not my cup of tea.

So wait my man studied martial arts for like more then 5 years and is still useless in combat.🤡 The writing is very childish and despite being reincarnated the mc's naivety is insane. Honeslty there's better novels out here but if you don't have anything to read this is okay enough to read.

The mc seems to have lost all his intelligence later chapters. He does something so stupid that should've resulted in death for innocent people if not for this being a novel. Just some advice for the author. Try not to make plots too convoluted if its not your strong suit because it ruins your characters and the story itself.

Exactly but even though he says all that he doesn't do shit about it.

Yeah im struggling to read this rn. When the mc tries to steal his master's fiancé in front of everyone I couldn't believe what I read.

Im sorry but the mc should've been dead a thousands times over. Literally he says he wants to win his masters financés heart in front of everyone. Yes they can't kill him, but they can make his life hell. The mc has to have only 2 braincells at most.

The story isn't but but the mc is unbearable he's too feminine. The author must be a women because it feels like the mc is a girl in a males body.