GooseOverlord

I’ll keep this short, as I’m not very far in the book. The age of the characters is a very big issue for me, 8 year olds don’t act like that, shit sometimes 18 year old don’t act like these characters. The age really pulls you out of the narrative. I’m trying to slog through these chapters because the idea of the story seems interesting but I really do hate reading about children doing these types of things.

This book has been dropped, don’t waste coins. I don’t understand why it’s being translated

I’ve deleted my first review. I’ve taken some stars off due to the obvious similarities to RotSSG. As mentioned in my original review the similarities can take you out of the story. That being said having reread 1100ish chapters I’ve come to realize why this story is so superior. At the time of writing the first review I had just started rereading RSSG and that may have coloured my opinion. The author attempts to write more compelling characters in his story and while some characters seem analogous at first glance to characters in the older series, you quickly see that they are much deeper. The similarities are shallow in every aspect. As soon as you leave the shallows and actually dive into the series you realize that you actually have a story. At the moment we’ve not seen any lost plot point, where the older series kept recycling plot points this series has kept things fresh, the similarities don’t make it to the plot. In short if we are to compare both stories, this newer book has better characters, characters that feel real and have goals. It has yet to recycle any plot points, if it ever does. Though the pace might be slightly slower due to developing its characters and plot.

I’ve been waiting for a good story that centered around pets since I read Monster Intergration, I was so disappointed with that book and how it handled the choosing of the pets and how they evolved. This book does pets very well, the pets all have unique personalities, they are obviously part of the story and not just decorative. Important note, the tags mention R18 and Harem, they might be a mistake has we’ve not seen any evidence of them by the current chapter. The MC has a love interest and it makes sense, the other female characters are interesting on their own which is fresh. The power system is interesting and its history more so, the world background is being discovered has the story progresses and I’m enjoying the discovery. Until this chapter I had 4 stars on Writing Quality, Story and world, but couldn’t think of real issues that I have with the story that would have me reduce the score by a full star.

Same here I bought Priv last month and the release rate dropped and then chapters started again on last day and first day of the new month so I gave it another go. It’s not bad if author let’s us know but when it’s radio silence it’s shit.

This is definitely different but as someone whose read the other book the similarities are distracting. This review is mostly for people who have read the other book, as they may experience the same issues. I’m rereading RSSG and just passed chapter 700 and I can definitely say that you have succeeded in making your characters more developed. At least for some of the characters. I’m starting to see why I dropped RSSG twice before. I might come back to this book and if I do I’ll write another review explaining my changed perspective.

Haven’t written one of these in awhile, but Author asked. Chapter release seems stable, but I only started reading the series earlier this month. The story seems to be progressing at a steady pace and shouldn’t be offensive to anyone. Writing quality is generally decent but could use some editing, it’s unfortunate because some plot points get lost in part because the reader second guesses the authors intent at times, for example, a familial relation. The world background could be more robust. Here are the biggest issues, character design is uneven, which is par for the course in Harem stories. Why do these characters like the MC, who are they outside the MC? These questions are answered for some to a certain degree, but not all. I enjoy [Face Slapping] this is the reason I’ve been reading this story, so far it’s been fun. I’m looking forward to the next slap. In short if you enjoy the standard harem and like face slapping then you’ll likely enjoy this book.

Oye a chapter due to golden tickets, I have some of those

Rules are rules, time to have her mind broken by the man who wishes to wear the Mantle of Pleasure. For the God of Pleasure breaking her mind would take a touch, for someone being molded for the title it shouldn’t take more then 30 minutes.

If she asks then he doesn’t have a choice, correct? Due to the influence of the Goddess of Lust.