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Tons of little grammatical mistakes, but what can I expect from fanfiction these days. Everything else is pretty good. ...................

Worm is a web series written about a world with superpowers. very grim story. Lots of fanfiction on sites like spacebattles. What op is referencing here is the Parahumans Online segments of the story with a forum that is exactly like this. Therefore the author got this format from worm.

happy new year

I guess 'ed' doesn't exist in the author's vocabulary.

I enjoy how much you update this. I always check back and there are a few chapters waiting, when other books haven't updated in days.

Why so many commas?

I enjoy the story. .....................................................................................................................

Reads like a typical chinese novel, very weird interactions and insults. I personally don't enjoy that type of writing. ffffffffffffffffffffffffff

Why would he be speechless? Wouldnt he just feel discouraged or something?

Do you mean "after showing..."? cuz I think I've seen that earlier too.