AbyssalSword
Read my novel bois and grils
Schreiben
des Lesens
50
Bücher lesen
Abzeichen
9Augenblicke
141
AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf the_reaver“I brokeded it Vegeta…”
'A golden shooting star that's so bright that I can even see it through a thick layer of clouds?' Alex thought with furrowed brows. 'That's strange. However, this world is already strange enough. This is just one more oddity added to the pile.'- AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf BlackFandetailMy Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial ArtsOst · I'm Really Not Xu Xian
- AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf CherryPoPsicle
You're funny. Thanks for the laugh, I hope you have a great day!
They could only fix it to the point that would allow him to walk somewhat normally with the support of a cane, but that was it. There was nothing more they could do. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf SebastianCarlisle
You're honestly hopeless...may God bless you with another brain because you've obviously lost yours.
"I think I'm supposed to train in this wilderness and become more powerful before entering human society again," Alex said. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf Simone007
While that is true, he is not obligated to do so. You give me instructions, I won't question them. If there's hole in your system, you cannot blame be for exploiting it because it's your fault.
"I'm sorry, Vice-Dean. In my fear of appearing too weak, I appeared too weak. I have lost, and that's that. I will remember your teachings, Vice-Dean," Michael said with a voice filled with shame. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf _Tea_Lover_
I hate you so much. 🙂
"I'm sorry, Vice-Dean. In my fear of appearing too weak, I appeared too weak. I have lost, and that's that. I will remember your teachings, Vice-Dean," Michael said with a voice filled with shame. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf MrShadowMan
YEEEEP!!
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf YuanMonarch
I need...the name...the nostalgia...it's...too...STROOOOOOOONG!!!!!!!!!!
Alex got a terrible idea. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf MrShadowMan
*cries like a baby*
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf MrShadowMan
"Relax! You already have everything you need to beat it!" "The power to believe in myself?" "Noooo...a KNIFE! Stab it!!"
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf MrShadowMan
“Are you cryin?!” “There’s just too much beauty in this world.”
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf Royston_Daniel
I read it as, "Thank YOU" rather than "THANK YOU".
Shang only nodded, also smiling. "No, thank you!" he said. - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf Volvo_62
"If I die learning, then I've learned and won't do it again."
'I've been too arrogant,' Alex thought with narrowed eyes. - AbyssalSword1yrVerschickt
This is my novel, so it's obviously a 5 stars, 6 even! But jokes aside, if I were to rate my stuff, I'd say 4.2 or 4.4 stars. Writing Quality: I think my writing quality is as good as it gets. It's just writing, anyone fluent can get a 5 stars. Stability of Updates: I'm writing this pretty early on, I just posted the 6th chapter, but I plan to update every other day, so I put it at a 4 stars. Story Development: I think my pacing is a little too fast, but I'll hopefully work on that. I'll put a 3 starts here. Character Design: I like to give general face to a character, such as their public demeanor and general behavior, but I also keep many things about them hidden. I also like to describe their appearances, so I'll give myself a 5 stars. World Background: Oh boy...😂. For worldbuilding, I like to create my worlds before I start writing the story. I write the way the world or universe is designed, then add a power system, then the powerhouses, then the little guys, and lastly I pick a character from a random place to be the main character. So, I'd like to give a 5 starts here, as well. I gave an honest review here, so please give me some constructive criticism, it will only help me improve...just don't be too harsh.
- AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf Totally_OriginalCh 4 Goal's decided! Safety assured?
- AbyssalSword1yrKommentiert
This is a gigguk reference btw.
THE TITANS ARE INVAD- AHEM...sorry. 😂 - AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf DaoistKLgiXPCh 1 I will drive that car!
- AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf Totally_OriginalCh 3 You suck, Dad.
- AbyssalSword1yrAntwortet auf Laramie_Cottam
It might be Webnovel's anti-piracy system. Just don't scroll too fast and if it happens scroll slowly. If it doesn't change, just refresh the page.
Shang looked at the grand gates for a while.