SunnySunUp

Nice story though you gotta improve your grammar. it's horrible, gotta read it twice so I can understand it. Use an app or something , you got a decent story here so improve how you write it.

unstable but lots of potential, will be adding this to my library.

can't say, let it progress for a while so it may seem interesting. title btw is too common, but the grammar is good and I felt author really went all out.