Faysal_Ahmed_5058

I had a very fun time reading this story and everything was laid out great. I didn't have trouble reading anything and I like the plotline. Good job author keep it up!

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After finishing the first few chapters, I can tell that the story has huge potential. The author's writing quality is mature and clean and skilled. I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work!

many well wishes for the author because he brought us such a great story. the opening chapter was amazing. I like how you have written the story but it needs more world building. hope you will improve more.

the story is good and characters are well described. but you need to improve the synopsis man. if I sugarcoat it, then you could do better synopsis but without sugarcoating, the synopsis is plain trash. I can't really feel any attraction to it. you have to let me know a brief description what I can expect from the story. please change the synopsis. this story is good but it might go unnoticed because of the synopsis.

the synopsis seemed like it was a rip-off of legendary mechanic but it is not. it has good starting and steady update. the story of okami Uchiha and red seems parallel to me.

loved the first chapter. it is interesting to see how you pushed your MC from being a narcissistic playboy to a monkey. man talk about bad blood you have with your MC, hahaha .

Your words have enlightened me

so much bullshit long interface