pretty good, it hasn't made cringe conversations yet or made a drastic personality change that is unexplainable in the story. the pacing is nice, I hope the quality remains good for the future chapters.

weak doesn't mean fake. the gun is dumb.

yeah this is BS. 50 mp for an attack that just causes small wound not even capable of causing massive internal injury? so weak for a magic gun.

ehh.. anyone with brains will probably do the same thing seeing that the return damage is at percent value and also the increase per skill point is just OP its not just 0.1% increase but 10%. seeing that nobody except him have seen through this bug is hurting my brain.

great synopsis must be followed by captivating story. Honestly I just read the first chapter after reading the synopsis, I not completely sure yet but it held great potential I hope the other chapters won't drag this evaluation down.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

a little bit of pessimism in there. the guy is not of the bubbly optimistic character type.

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