byTraaq

Not sure which ones trying to be conveyed, but I view stories as the top of a roof (2 stories = 2 roofs) and floors as well, the floors (2nd floor = 1 roof).

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Before you go any further with Demonio Fluer, you should check out “What Everyone Gets Wrong About Demonio” by GrandLineReview on YouTube. It basically says it’s her awakening and her desire to become the demon child she was always called. In your story she was never called a demon child, so what would your Robin want to become for Rob?

Maybe make Gryphons for the other healers and make a traveling doctor organization?

Grammar is much better than your last one so keep it up! Only current issues I’m seeing is you confuse male vs female sometimes and you don’t add quotation marks (“) if there’s 2 separate spoke sentences in a single paragraph.

I’ve personally never see anyone do that, not sure why..

He might be able to make it without it, but he should go back and get the blue prints for Enels ship and incorporate that into the Platinum Angel, and even go to the moon at some point. He could possibly make the moon inhabitable for Robin/Uta and it can be a home base/Vacation spot.

Nor would a 12 year be piss drunk…

Probably not until he officially leaves the Jedi order.

1 major task (guiding an entire world) for each life, guiding a world is a massive effort. This will continue forever since he’s immortal. Unless he’s given an out where he can finally rest and be with his family in the after life, this is definitely servitude….