Cjoseph23

ive been reading this book since it first came out but recently it feels like there have been a lot filler chapters that are taking 5-10 chapters just to wrap up small events i feel like I Wasted my coins on the privilege ch this month :(

there was obviously a 4 year gap where I decided to work on improving my quality of writing and I'm finally on a dedicated attempt.

The first chapter was so hard to read . I'm no expert but it dealt like 3 chapters worth of story shoved into 1 short chapter. I'm also sad to see it hasn't been updated in 10 months so even if Wanted to keep reading it feels pointless

she definitely should not I Think her part in the story is safely over emery has had enough bouncing emotions between women.

I've been reading by day one love this story definitely has 1st place rankings potential hope the author is doing well and need more chapters

easily a 5 star read by far one of the best I've ever read on web novel I believe that it would be top 10 if more chapters were released regularly

I have read every single chapter available the book is without a doubt a great read. my only complaint is slow chapter release although I understand writing may be hard I've noticed the author writes several different books at the same time which I feel slows down production for each individual book. I've had to take several months breaks at a time just so there are some chapters for me to read.

i get what your daying but didnt the character claim he was losing and at his limit he was trying to take 2 with him.

what was originally a amazing book was slowly goven up on by a lazy writer and ended horribly out of nowhere dissapointong all fans.

when i started reading this novel it was a 5 star across the board peice of art but there was a drop in quality around ch 300 and onward it feels as though the author fealt he could just say random dumb things and act as if they are fact in the book example- it is claimed that the human brain processes at 100 meters a sec in the later chapter but the fact is you dont measure the processing power of the brain with normal measurements like meters thw human brain processes at 60 bits a sec similar to a computer processing speed is explained in mb and gb.i just wish the author would research before saying random things it ruins the immersion into the story.