translation is extremely good I can't wait to read the next chapter

The author did an excellent job in translating this story this is the first MTL I read that doesn't hurt my head keep up the excellent work

it's an even match

yeah the original name is Apex

I like the concept going with the political it's rarely done but the way it's executed it's a giant ass pull. Don't get me started about talking about hagoromo background😑

the original name of the story is growing up black

just to let you guys know this story was never finished 🤣 the concept was good but the execution let's just say this it wasn't good 😶

thanks for the chapter

but it's your deck you can make it however you like but I would recommend harpie's feather duster and magic cylinder

that's because they don't care about the band / limited rules or don't know it or never play tag Force series or never been to an actual tournament in real life. Personally the only time I ever use 3 of a kind for cards like nimble momonga, giant germ and giant rat type of cards

why three pot of greeds you can technically only have one during the GX era 😅

thanks for saving us time from reading this crap you're a true hero 🫡

story is pretty good so far. But I need more 😈

story is pretty good other than the fact he's trying to kill the third hokage before orochimaru instead you should go after the grandson instead make him suffer

thanks for the chapter

dude this is obviously a mtl🤣 literally on the first chapter they called Itachi god Itachi and they got Sasuke's name wrong 😶

yeah this is definitely a mtl especially if you're using the words like undead bird Marco instead of Phoenix Marco 🤣

why not just write a review instead like I did 😁

yeah this story is stolen Yami: The gamer kage by I'mjusttryingtofindmyway on fanfiction.net

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