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Richie520

Richie520

Lv3
2019-09-15 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Verschickt

    Here's my initial review: 1. The story is indeed a slow burn 2. The summary is very intriguing 3. Explanation and world building is to top point 4. The writing seemed realistic 5. Writing flow seemed consistent and easy to understand 6. Plot development is also good 7. Character design is well done Overall, It's a highly recommended book

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    the chapter seemed short for me!!! But it's ok.

    Ch 1 deleted
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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    ????

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    is heroine a dimwit!!! I mean it took her so long to get she got transmigrated

    Ch 1 deleted
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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    understandable

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    wow!!! the words have life in them

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    yeah...a forest is no less than a maze

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    trust ur instincts

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    omg!! the title!!! is it a bait??

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    This is well explained.

    Ch -1 del
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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    so me.

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasie · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Verschickt

    The story's pace is slow, but enjoyable. The starting chapters are especially good with all the descriptions and the emotions were conveyed nicely. Would surely recommend this.

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    Fantasie · trumpet_creeper01
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    Description is top notch

    Dressed in all silver with blue highlights long dress which is glistening under the moon light and dazzling hotel lights, she looked no less than any princess and is breathtakingly beautiful. Anyone who looked at her once couldn't avert their gaze away from her. Soon, she became the attention of everyone.
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    Fantasie · trumpet_creeper01
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    Stay strong, young lad.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1. A pawn among many
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    Fantasie · trumpet_creeper01
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    Poor guy

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    Fantasie · trumpet_creeper01
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Kommentiert

    He is hiding there, right?

    " He must be hiding near the yachts. Check the area!" The second-in-hand commanded again. As his orders echoed the harbour, soon his men began the search mission, while few flew to the highest tower of the dock, torching the whole area.
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    Fantasie · trumpet_creeper01
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