Sage_Fire

you saw that Mentality of MC 'Changed' and He was fine Way too well being a girl,I was getting Frustrated Reading this, Because This MC has no pride? I somehow Don't want to read it, Its uncomfortable to read, Because That devil Only Seems like A total Gold digger , MC is a hero, so why not? MC is Clumsy and I think Sometimes It was Mentioned that he Couldn't 'refuse' ? Why is there no explanation of devils and its abilities? I just wanted to kill that devil, MC is being Manipulated, if not, This author Is a sadist and This Novel is not for us

Hey, It's already Been 3 weeks... you didn't stop writing did you?

Thanks, U saved me some Brain cells and 5-6 Fish oil Capsules;)-

Loli no Touch! Where is FBI? Did They die somewhere? Didn't they Start Camping in A.C Vents? As long as intension is Impure U cannot Say LOLI (Lol)

did he go 'yang'?

vro, Vegeta at saiyan saga Destroy earth? / this is A major plot-hole if The planet can be destroyed by D ranks? Well... its dropped

Lol, I always See Authors Forget about mentioning Fūinjutsu, Why? It is The most Underrated and Almost God level Op in The right hands, He could Have had better Fūinjutsu Potential If he used To program and invent... bruh, If You are using it in the story then Ignore tis' Comment,

Only God I can Consider as Bad Is Indra, And others,? not That much, But Indra, If Made A Villain Will destroy The Protagonist Before He was even Born... bruh... This Author Is Idiot, If You Can't portray It properly Then Don't Write about it Like that, Make Something Similar Or Change names or whatnot, It's Just A Biased Opinion Of an Author High on sugar, Desperately Searching for Co*anie...

Can You Give him Kaio-ken After Vegeta Arc? and Make A new technique, Kaio-ken Amplifies KI Exiting The body, The Body not used to it Gets Overworked and Overcharged, You could Have him learn from Kaio-ken 0.1 or something... lol And Make him Fight his inner Self, He Caused An accident Before Being reborn, He has to face himself and come to terms with himself, Like In Naruto Series, Goku Achieved Ultra instinct, i think there is a reason He reached It on his own, Some conditions? Moving Without thinking? Then why doesn't Animals Become Ultra Instinct? I think It Requires Purity, You have to reach The purest state in something, And I think Every Ultra Instinct is different, Because not every UI can Have KamehameHa, and Purity is Required because he is mortal, a god Is pure Of A Concept, Kai- Creation, Hakaishin- Destruction. Angel- The name defines Itself. A mortal Will require a Pure Something, Goku's was Pure Desire For Fighting Without killing, He valued Strength of His opponents, As Long As His opponents don't Live Solely without Killing, he Will Spare them. So make Him Able to Be Content with himself, And Maybe Make him Modify The 'Witchcraft' Later Shown in Dragon ball super , Or you can Add Something Closely related to FuinJutsu, Shadow and Light Style Should Exist There , Make a FuinJutsu 'Seal' For Sun and Moon, Gods Will Be shocked Seeing a Mortal Create Something out of Nothing From Sun and Moon Seal of Sage of Six paths, From The Concept of Light and Shadow, Make Truthseeking Orbs, Or Make Your Eyes Mangkyo Sharingan, You can Make The Susanoo Dense To Amplify It's Effects after Mastering it, It would Make Good Protection against People When They go SUPER SAIYAN , or F*ck with Beerus By Nullifying Hakai with Truthseekin Orbs, Long live Human, Maybe Make him precieve God Ki When Supreme Kai Appears? Then he Will go 'Human God' Form?

Harem, Itself in Not bad, BUT it's Abused, Used, And Badly Written, They turn The Whole Story On that, They Reduce IQ of Characters and Disregard everything That is not related to Smut. That's The Reason I dislike Harem. Because It's badly written, I Still like The ones Who Can atleast Focus on something else, It's A total disappointment that they turn A Good Novel Into smut And Slowly/ Quickly turn It Into something That we search for On the internet for relieving purposes, we don't need that thing, we Can already Watch and Read Them On Certain Sites, They Don't Need To dirty And Kill our Brain Cells With all The poor World Building and Slowly Or Already Turning The MC Hateful and Lecherous Pervert... or they were already a Pervert, They have no Redeeming Qualities, That's why The Hate for Harem exists. We already have means to relieve Us, We Are not retarded to Expect it to be everywhere.