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This novel is quite good to get hooked but can be better if bellow points are handled better 1. Fighting scenes are very boring with mc and opponents having very limited skills .Fighting pattern is getting similar as story process. 2. Making chaps lengthy with unnecessary words describing how a person looks and what he wears (even if you know he'll get killed within the same chap) 3. Same constant reaction from mc and fmc like they smirks cruelly, smirks mischievously, smirks like this like that (getting a very frustrated vibe reading that) 4. R-18 scenes are very simplistic with not much detailing and a tad bit boring (feels like r-18 scenes are there or not doesn't matter)

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Thanks for the chap

I also like harem but should be like 6-7 at most with adequate roles and personality of thier own and not just to fullfill the titles of harem

good!

I'm simply intrested because the protagonist is MALE. I'm tired of female protagonists. GIVE ME A SHAMELESS MC. AHHHHH! ALL HAIL THE MALE SHAMELESS PROTAGONISTS.

Thanks for the hard work author!

I think the start is pretty much the same as always in every novel so lets explore in deep to give real feedback

Is it r18 if not I am not interested in normal boring cultivation novel

I don't like this Shi fi because she is a slut as she told herself that she offered to touch her breast to seduce other man