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Good writing, interesting and fast start to the story.

Awesome writing, captivating story from the very beginning!

Great writing with a few typos/weird word choice. Really interesting start to this, and immersive world building.

Good writing, interesting beginning to this story. Although "Samuel" as a female name is a bit confusing.

Just started reading, what is it with these MLs? Do people like that really exist out there, that act so outlandishly without any self reflection?

Some good writing, but also some weird phrases, maybe a translation thing? Interesting start to the story.

Ok writing, ok story so far, a little confusing at first but I think it could get better.

Good writing, story starts out a little uneven, but must admit I cheered when Tristan killed Jack against FL's wishes. FL too brainwashed by "family" to realize that was for the best.

Just started reading. Great beginning, great writing, very descriptive.

Good writing, but I'll never understand stories where the FL loves the ML for no reason whatsoever, especially when he treats her abhorrently.