Lucifer122333

The writing quality is good. The grammer is mostly correct. The action scenes are not cringed and are well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Hope you keep up the good work and continue to novel

this chapter was good waiting for next chapter hope you would post it soon

keep up the good work

Personally I liked the story it isn't rush covered details etc. And for the critiques, you aren't paying him to write so shut the hell up

Personally I am liking this story. This is a Fan-fic so it's upto Author on what to write and what not. Besides stop complaining you aren't paying him to write. So it's a good Fan-fic I would recommend it. It's not overpowered but it has lots of potential.

nice keep it up

Good novel. One of the best novel I have read of this genre. Keep up the good work Author AJPaturde. Good writing. Easy to understand since there are no complicated words. All the best! Looking forward for next chapter

It's good right