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She is the main heroine...

my brain hurts jut writing this chapter.

nope but in a comma.... having a massive writer's block and burnout... not only that personal life is going through a tough time.... sry folks...

if need to fix clarity and grammar use Grammarly.... its better than chatgpt, especially free ones...

As of right now the story is too fast with slow update. Amount of dialogues makes it look like a script than a written story. Character is very bland. This fan-fiction is of modern family, but the character intersection feels off. Mc's relationship status changed way too fast, no added description. Needlessly created drama. Actions taking by MC is confusing with no apparent explanation. Time-skips and jumps are frequent making it hard to understand whats going on in the story.

My bad.

That happens when you work with a big studio that has a distribution channel. But I don't know the exact ratio. But it heavily favors the big studios

!!?

What? you mean is she part of his record label i.e Feather Columbia Records, then yes.

Then wait for the future, telling now will become like a spoiler. Better yet, I didn't plan that far ahead. So, far volume 2 has an outline. I have no idea what to write for volume 3 until finish the previous volume.