Nocturnal314

Btw, I am enjoying the novel and thank you for writing! This was just me venting because I am so immersed!

I’m confused. Why is the MC looking to replace her staff? She said she was worried if someone “recognized it” but does she even need a staff to use magic? It’s never explained why others can do magic, like the demon, adventurers, and other gods without a conduit of some sort… but the strongest character with insane stats needs to use a staff? Also, based on her stats, even when she does lesser spells they are able to overwhelm even the strongest this world has to offer (outside of gods) so why would she even need to use the staff for the mundane things she’s trying to get another one built for. It seems counterproductive and I’m very against nerfing an MC after 50+ chapters of seeing her at this power level. If that was the case, I feel that the novel should of started off locking her staff, spells, and stats behind a memory wall or something and the more she learns about the world, the more abilities she unlocks. However, the current direction of novel seems… pointless. If whoever she’s hidding the staff from… knows of the staff.. wouldn’t they also have the “inspect” skill? Thus, they would immediately know the MC is a goddess or something out of normal. They would for sure notice the “divine dragon”. I know I’m beating a dead horse, but ALSO if she’s worried about “players” then why is she circulating the “chess” game? The bracelet? The coins? I.am.confusion. Hopefully this is addressed…

Mc is kinda weird.. did she forget her stats were in the millions? Does she how how big the gap is between a million and 100? Ofc the boss of the gnolls wouldn’t be interesting 😭. My 10 year old sister could tell you that you’d have to go down to the bottom to even get a little bit of entertainment.

What in the world 💀

Every chapter is so out of order. This feels like it should’ve happened before the last chapter for sure.

I thought she was vampire royalty? How are her parents human?

I wonder if the witch powers can help negate vampire weaknesses which is why she wants it so bad

This novel had a lot of potential… it truly did but the MC is just horribly written in my opinion. One of the most fundamental aspects of a novel is the growth of the main character, however this novel ignores that. The MC is dense to the point of the reader wanting to rip their eyes out. The MC flees the county, with the stories villian, after only one conversation. ONE conversation was all it took for her to throw away 6 months of building with the female love interest. Oh, also they flee in one day, no plan or anything, just wing it bro (spoiler: it goes horribly wrong, shocker). To make matters worse, she completely TRAMUATIZES the female love interest before she leaves after promising her & her father that she would never betray or hurt Rachel. I only read this novel for Rachel, she was the only character written correctly in my opinion. Also, the grammar and language barrier ruins the immersion of the novel and it really needs a rewrite. There are no use of quotations to denote who is speaking and there are often misused words to describe situations. I could make this review longer but, I’m still annoyed by this novel atm so I’ll leave it here.

You promised you wouldn’t betray or hurt Rachel to her dad and you literally did it in a heartbeat so why does a “promise” matter now.