my only critique is that maybe you should have the mc understand and explain things a bit more... everyone loves mystery but the story feels a bit too open ended.. I don't even still understand why the second master is evil.

why are there no comments on this amazing novel?

been following your stories for so many years at this point. you've gone through a lot but kept going on, as one of your probably first couple fans I'm really proud of you and happy you've made it through so much

some people may not know but this dude is the mc of this authors other works that used to be on like Wattpad and stuff