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Jaxiel

Jaxiel

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(ON REVISING STORY - That Overpowered Friend) Learning how to write~ Also posting stories in RoyalRoadLegends :)

2019-06-15 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiela year ago
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    Ayt, another isekai goin to my library. Just like what other comments says, your writing is amazing, you go in depth on certain aspects. this is some good shit.

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    Jaxiela year ago
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    Eyyy we go isekai again. Always excited to see when someone creates one. A unique approach, summary made me remember a certain manwha, your writing is amazing, all in all goods.

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    Jaxiela year ago
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    I do see passion in your writing, just gotta get better at spelling. The paragraphs are a bit too tight to read but understandable. Interesting read just needs a lot of polishing. :DD

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    Jaxiela year ago
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    You go in-depth when explaining scenes, def good quality writing. A good zombie concept for the story, title's almost similar to danmachi anime lol. chapters are quite long though but I guess that's more content.

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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiela year ago
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    Already, your synopsis is intriguing. The way go in-depth through your description is pretty impressive. your quality is def. 5/5. though there are some parts where sentences get a bit cramped and hard to read. Still, its worth the read

  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiela year ago
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    Sheeeeeeeeeesh, that was fire. its Saitama, already a 5/5 also, interestingly quite Good for an OPM Fanfic. Have a try, worth the read. --

  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiela year ago
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    Haven't read zombie apocalypse in a while, its good. Also, your comedy is gold. Impressive how created a story out of a discord chat. worth to give a read for fun.

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    Jaxiela year ago
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    Bruh, your writing style is already amazing. It isn't too straightforward yet still have dept on it. Anything else is just as good as your writing, worth giving a try

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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiela year ago
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    It's intriguing, although the dialogue could do some work and also the synopsis. There potential with the concept, keep writing you got a good story to tell.

  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiela year ago
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    Bruh this is so cool. Your writing is precise. The depth is just simple yet still elaborative, keep on writing, I'm still on a few chapters, and this has potential. def 5/5.