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TrackShadow

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2019-06-14 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Antwortet auf NewComer714

    what about your other novel, the hollywood tycoon one. is it dropped?

    Ch 34 Enlistment
    Godfather System
    Filme · NewComer714
    detail
  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Antwortet auf NewComer714

    what about your other novel, the hollywood tycoon one. is it dropped?

    Ch 34 Enlistment
    Godfather System
    Filme · NewComer714
    detail
  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Kommentiert

    the antagonist was needed but you created a second one without giving a closure to the first one. I mean, what would lucas do about his family, I mean payback? and then harvey?

    Ch 209 Wealth
    Tycoon Actor in Hollywood
    Filme · NewComer714
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Kommentiert

    why not change his name and clarify things, maybe just before oscar. and does he fear his father or something like that? then its just lame.

    Ch 206 Unforseen
    Tycoon Actor in Hollywood
    Filme · NewComer714
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Kommentiert

    would there be any difference if he hadnt fought dumbledore. I mean this fight had no consequences. there was no meaning in it. he didn't injure dumbeldore, he didn't take or break the elder wand, didn't do anything. why did he fight in the first place?

    Ch 51 Bout
    Just Another Chat Group
    Anime und Comics · IHaveHidden
    detail
  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Kommentiert

    harry has a bad childhood manipulated by dumbledore. just agune, if skylark grows his friendship, helps him see, then harry joining skylark leaving dumbledore.....its just i am feeling bad for harry, his whole life is worse than an elf, atleast they know their masters

    Ch 243 Chapter 242 "Harry's Downfall"
    Reincarnated as Draco's Twin To Dominate Hogwarts
    Anime und Comics · Scaramousse
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Antwortet auf VonBritannia

    we sure remember damien very differently. he is the worst among all bat clan members. i think damien is someone else's son with bruce's apperance

    Ch 67 Boundaries
    Different Batman
    Anime und Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Kommentiert

    so there is still damian?

    Ch 66 Son?
    Different Batman
    Anime und Comics · Cedric_7512
    detail
  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Kommentiert

    so, he doesn't like heroine because she matured and got sensible? free of heart? maybe I dont get it...well let's see what the author does.

    Ch 240 Chapter 239 "Gathering Information"
    Reincarnated as Draco's Twin To Dominate Hogwarts
    Anime und Comics · Scaramousse
    detail
  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Kommentiert

    lone hero was the perfect one. partner was a necessity for the original batman not this one. let others be a dumpster. gotham only needs batman. i just cant picture a situation where she is absolutely needed. just give her a normal and safe life in gotham protected by ONLY Batman because as he said gotham is his territory. waiting for constantine's retribution.

    Ch 63 First addition
    Different Batman
    Anime und Comics · Cedric_7512
    detail
  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Antwortet auf Cedric_7512

    can you give us a pitch black one and one with green instead of red

    [Picture]
    Different Batman
    Anime und Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow1mth
    Kommentiert

    bruce wayne is batman? how did she get there? let them appear together and then her grain brain will turn into popcorn

    Ch 62 Akagami
    Different Batman
    Anime und Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow2mth
    Kommentiert

    cheated of lifesavings and inheritance? poisoned? and still reform? then why did you write about being an anti hero. i request you to understanding its meaning first

    Ch 33 Chapter 32: "Unmasking the Culprit: Investigating and Catching the Perpetrator"II
    Overpowered Cricket system
    Prominente · Asta_utsugi
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow2mth
    Kommentiert

    I hope line zhi goes to jail

    Ch 540 What Happened That Night
    From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show
    Fantasie · SandKastle
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow2mth
    Kommentiert

    dear author, is it that necessary to keep hiding that he has lost his memories -maybe he could just say that some of his memories are missing, no need for details. a lot of misunderstanding could be solved.

    Ch 538 June Was Stupid After All
    From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show
    Fantasie · SandKastle
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow3mth
    Kommentiert

    itachi : "inherit the will of fire"

    All that is estimated to be more useful than cultivating a white-eyed wolf.
    BTTH Life Simulator System
    Anime und Comics · Kisshot
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow3mth
    Kommentiert

    excellent story.......just few things.........1>let ace live for himself, trying to survive because it could bring pain to his loved ones is not that appealing...2>the image training part is a very big cheat, could have just given the power to practice in different space with maybe 20:1 time ratio compared to real life....3>maybe double devil fruits and swordsmanship.

    Ch 9 9. Brothers reunite. Clash of Supreme Kings.
    One Piece: As Portgas D. Ace
    Anime und Comics · ChaosWriter
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow3mth
    Kommentiert

    go to company's boss, eye contact with him, let him agree to a new contract of higher pay, absolutely eve's choice on producing songs, higher percentage of profit distribution, and everything that is advantageous to the group, sign it fast and then viola, everything solved. but something tells me, june definitely does not have the brain to think of it. ............

    Ch 451 June's Unusual Harem
    From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show
    Fantasie · SandKastle
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow4mth
    Kommentiert

    author, how about a chapter named "cliffhanger"?

    Ch 399 Their Performances (2)
    From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show
    Fantasie · SandKastle
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  • TrackShadow
    TrackShadow4mth
    Kommentiert

    second chapter?

    Ch 398 Their Performances (1)
    From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show
    Fantasie · SandKastle
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