Abdel

I'm gonna go off on a little rant, but I gotta nothing against you or the author, so you know, in case you get grudge or something. Firs, I understand that the MC was in a dire situation, and sometimes extreme actions are necessary for survival. However, the way the MC felt good about killing does raise some concerns for me. Feeling nothing or being in shock is one thing, but deriving pleasure from taking a life, even in self-defense, can be troubling. It’s not about whether he should have killed them, but how he processed it emotionally. Second, comparing killing a human to killing an insect oversimplifies the gravity of taking a life. Humans have complex emotions and moral considerations, which is why many people would naturally question their actions after such an event. This introspection is a sign of a healthy conscience, not weakness. Ultimately, it’s important for characters to reflect a range of human experiences and emotions, including the difficult ones. It makes them more relatable and realistic.

he should make*

if the Mana diaster does happen, he should mana location bracelets or something that could help him locate his family in case it happens. and even if it doesn't happen, it could be helpful later if someone gets kidnap.(that's if he knows of to create such a device or he can buy one if it already exists)

it's your story, do you. I wasn't really complaining, just giving my opinion. the story is great so far, so I trust in your judgment.

I just hope he doesn't become a self-centered hobo killer that acts like a young master....only because he has a lot of power. because contrary to what people think might doesn't always make right.

thank God I am not the only one who thinks the "story" doesn't seem right...

we never know. fantasy world DNA and birth aren't the same as the real world. look at elden ring, some people shouldn't even exist if we go by earth logic..anyway all this to say kids don't forget protection.

noice one of the best novel I've read. to bad it doesn't have a sequel🥲

lmao that's so accurate 🤣

which other books? I only see this one in his profile.(its a genuine question I am not trying to be a jerk)