Not like i don't like music Theme, but i must listen the music so i can understand the expression from Character. Music transcend beyond words, even i muggle about music, i somehow can understand if i listen it. And Thank You for you hard work. i Will support until this fanfic/novel finish.

Noooo! first Big Conflict between brother and sister! By the way, i waiting Naruko and Ruby Route. i'am sorry for Lucy Route, her storyline really hard to be understood. its really good if i can play music in this Apps.

I know. This arc maybe we can called "Preparation Before Big War" 😤

Confession?!

Ahh... My little wish become true in this chapter. Thank You For The Chapter

Too many Perfect Character with Perfect Body in Korean LN, like formula : For Men must have 6666 rule (6 pack abs, 6 figure salary, 6 feet tall, 6 inch D), and for Women they must have 8 Hourglass body, and brain rot. Until i think its not Korean People actually in reality. With that formula, its really not suprising author always make depressing ending, because author want make reader attach to beautiful/handsome died character or sympaty to MC suffering. But for me, its already Mainstream. because i already know, author always Break The Death Rule : Easy Resurrection, Rebirth, Regress, Loop, or have any magic to make died character alive again, to reach happy ending or sacrifice MC to make happy ending for other Character.

Nice Story. Keep it on Library. I think MC has a potential to be Good Neutral Character. I just hope MC not so Over Power and MC can death if he make mistake in battle. Background story for MC with another Character is good, they (MC and His Friend) still think and act like toddler, its a good Point for me. Really i just hope MC is not so OP because it will ruin MC friendship and MC background. at least i hope MC friend can keep up with MC in term Battle Power.

Uwogghh! Ruby Route is very interesting! What a wholesome story. But problem-solving between Ruby & Weiss kind rush, i think they will have big fight (only my imagination to make storyline more wide, don't mind it).

Yes. I think its storyline still good. I'am.. just sad can't read again Var vs Oezelia. Thanks for explanation.

Huhuhu... Chapter 51,52,53 already deleted😭.Why?

Done. But i drop it half-way.

Novel Extra Nobody by Alfir. i don't know its suit with you taste, because its No-Harem Sect.

Thanks. i hope you not discourage to write again because this review. I already read many Novel Extra fanfic. And i know many of Novel Extra fanfic is drop, because author put too many Buff to their MC, and have Flawless Personality, so story arc in Canon Novel Extra become short because MC can easy solve Canon Novel Extra Conflict. And they don't know how to put Good Filler Chapter outside from Novel Extra Storyline. That why Perfect MC + Flawless MC always boring and not attract anything (except, you can write Canon Female Lead with interesting Personality, and have good compability with your MC)

I just want write review. This fanfic Will have Boring Phase. Your MC already Invincible (Immortality from Ajin), has knowledge about future plot, and good looking. If you put Calm Protagonist Template to your MC, this MC already Perfect Human. He don't need Character Development except training, because he already has Perfect Personality. Its Will boring story for me. Atleast you must put some weakness to MC, so he will know learning from mistake or something.

You must know many Korea LN is has : Good Start > Repeating Mid Arc > Bad Ending Conclusion.

CorrupTobi

Thank You for the Chapter. I really love Ruby in this story😍

Hahaha... It's true. Very common nowdays Fanfic and Light Novel. For convenience make storyline and plot armor

Thank You Very Much. I hope you always healthy and can have time to write this fanfic until end. If Ending haven't decided. I really hope you can make Single Route, and Harem Route. Thank you for your hard work. Good to read this fanfic/original story.

Yeah. My regret is i don't read it before you Reupload. its already 100 chapter😭