Higgs

Great potential, a bit okay with the world building, and great show of character improvement. Though I do have a few questions. The EXP needed for him to level up to tier 2 is gigantic even with his power of x10000 so why are the other characters on par with him? I can understand that the perk of being a high family would help but mathematically, it doesn't make any sense to me that he is still tier 1 at chapter 31 even with all of the exp he earned. Basically, his SSS rank power its not that helpful in terms of scaling it with the speed of cultivation with his classmates in big families. I would understand if it was S-Rank but as we know its SSS rank I was hoping it would be faster for him to rank up but I guess I was wrong. I bit disappointed on that one. I wish it would be faster for him to rank up since he can still hide it from his pears but hey that's just what i think.

Its honestly disappointing. The MC here is nothing but a weak ass shit who hides his powers. I mean, you could've solved your problem from the very start if you had shown them a glimps of your powers. This would've been a better story if that actually happened.

To be honest, I'm very disappointed with this. It started of great but then all hell break loose. The story had a lot of potential but man the author lacks so much imagination it sucks. Even the world building and the flashbacks, seems so confusing that its like tossing new information one after the other with no proper introduction of who it was or a depiction of that scene to imagine in a bit more clearly. And to the topic at hand of the lack of imagination, why have I said that? He had spell creation and created an item box skill and all that but he never thought of creating a disguise skill? Not to mention even the skill he has seems off to me, with that type of skill "skill creation" you can just create a skill that sucks in mana to from the surroundings constantly and have a spare back up to store it to have near unlimited mana in you. Even the plot itself sucks. The revenge thing works a bit even if was like a "meh" kind of thing but after that it was just collecting women. Its like collecting women like pokemon from then on.

As much as I would like to comment so many details for this novel let me just summarize it by telling that I have nothing good to say to this novel.

The premise of the story seems fine but the execution seems like ah "meh" type of story. I find it so wasteful to spend this type of system in that type of method. If you had the power to gain something every time you die why not just rush to a place like a "Forbidden Mountain" or something where mortality rate is so high that you die just by being there which every cultivation novel have in any Genre. You can just stay trapped there and die so many times that you become so OP and just stop dying when your strong enough to resist what is making people die there.

Story is great, character growth is great, world building is great, etc. I don't think its caught up with it here but with the actual current chapters, I do like to point out that its disappointing that he took so much chapters in the Dark World and Blood World. I cant speak for other readers but for me, the blood arc with the blood god clone seems too long. People came here for something that he may be able to use in public. Except for his recovery an some factors, most of his gains in the blood world with all those "blood" skills, moves, body constitution, etc. would be completely useless if he fights in public. In those chapters from 1700 - 2000 he could have transitioned quickly to a higher level but and went back quickly. I see no point of him staying too long in the blood world in the long run.

The story is great and all that along with the concept of it. The progress of the characters seems fine for me but the only that's a minus for me is that, I don't know it this is just me but I usually get confused on which world they are in. It would've been more helpful if you could stick to one world first before going to the next and not going back and forth. A not so much minus for me is the DXD section. I don't understand the point of adding that section since it doesn't that much excitement for me you know. It would've been more helpful if there we're parts where the OG characters in DXD like Rias, Issei, Vali, etc. could compare themselves to the MC or the FLs. Making him the successor of the Biblical God destroyed the DXD arc for me.

Yeah I got my review deleted as well.

It was an enjoyable story especially in the beginning but the longer it went on it became more and more boring since the cycle keeps repeating on the events. I could have been fine with that, what threw me of is the harem collecting pokemon thing. You do know that doing this ruins the essence of potential romance in the novel. You're just collecting them all and at some point one or two of the FL causing it to ruin the story.

The premise of the story is good but it lacks the essence. The progress seemed so pointless that I was so bored after reading 50 chapters. I mean what's the point of all this Dawn Sect? I get the Godfather thing but what's the end goal? And accounting the fact that the detectives seem to suck since any detective would've figured out who that Godfather is after a month or 2 especially the proclaimed good detective sister. This could have been a better story if it contained a bit like the detective essence found in Death Note or Detective Conan.