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I love the development with Eri, but it does feel like I missed like an entire ark with Overhaul or something when I suddenly read the last few chapters. It was a bit weird.
Judging by how Izuku treated the girls, I think harem would be fine. At the very least, he treats them like proper people, not like pokemons he has to catch like other novels. Seriously, this is one of the best novel in how you depict the creation of a harem. Please continue. In my opinioin, drastically changing course to a single love interest will make this novel lose one of its main attraction.
A lot of things happened since he got the MCG, and he's already going for a mission. Even if I let him think with his stick, there's a lot of things going on and never found the right timing to become intimate with his mom, sisters, and aunt without being slightly forceful, which he didn't want. Don't worry, the first mission will open the floodgates for his feelings towards his mom, sisters, and aunt.
Regarding udpates, I'm currently writing my thesis for University as well as juggling two other stories in wattpad. With how much goes into each chapter and the word count, it'll be difficult for me to go more than 1 chapter/week. As for Yuuji's character development, he'll gain more confidence as he goes through the quests. "If you want to see a man's character, then give him power." I want Yuuji to be a good character who doesn't abuse it and be a mindless guy who solves everything with muscles. He just received his power, and he's not someone who will immediately get drunk on it. But after he uses it during missions and learns about it more, he'll be more confident.
Thanks for the recommendations XD I've already got some worlds planned (around 4), and although some might be "high tier worlds", the missions given to them will not be impossible. And, I do plan on returning back to some worlds to help the friends they've made in that world to tackle the more difficult challenges! So they will be returning to previous worlds even without missions.
Had to research and learn about the different types of trading. Hope they're not terribly wrong XD
I mean... I'd rather have an actual protagonist that thinks with his brain and love with his heart rather than with his c*ck. It'll be fun in the short run, but I want this to be an actual story, not a smut one shot. Don't worry, your horniness will be satiated in time. In fact, at the time of writing this, there are already r-18 contents :D
Thank you for letting me know what you think about it xD This chapter was written when I hadn't even released the first chapter into webnovel and when I was on a writer's high, writing everything that comes to mind. But don't worry, I have put all of the concerns and suggestions I've received after the publishing of the story and have adjusted the flow, pace, and writing of my story to be better enjoyed by everyone :D
I do read them, but these chapters are all pre-written XD The chapters I've written after I've read the comments do have much less description so don't worry.