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Dragon Ball does go well with Chinese set of mind somehow 😂 The story is complete AU, forget about canon and just enjoy a new set timeline altogether. A MC that is completely evolving on each fight, and fight like a Saiyan enjoying and getting benefits of their Zenkai boost while he is at it. Hell even Broly is the DBZ movie one with the potential of the DBS one, an absolute evil savage. PD: Get this fair warning there is baching of the main cast on this one and yet conserve the essence of their personalities.

The premise is good but the execution is bad. I mean the entire story is a monologue with few interactions mostly with his system. And talking about system that is another bad point on this, too focused on stupid self sentered monologue, and retelling of the canon events with a MC watching on the background doing more monologue.

One of the many things Morty put a sick into… On the right his girlfriend on the left Summer carrying their child and followed by his father in law Cthulhu 🤣

There’s also Cthylla his outer god girlfriend 🤣

You don’t need to go far just imagine having Mr. Frundles from the same universe 🤣

Review until chapter 11: The MC is stupid and a pussy that’s all in the story. Making your Character suffer for no reasons or random stupid reasons isn’t a character development. I don’t know if I’m suicidal or not, but I in that same situation would have used the gun to off the Ganger even if someone else kills me. I rather die killing a asshole than some random woman that have nothing to do with me.

Nah this chapter ruined the read…

Can’t say, the most powerful in the Worm universe is just plain bullshit+ Spoiler: I mean Scion from Worm is just plain bullshit even on Warhammer 40k standars… I mean it, Scion can walk laterally on planes and destroy a sector of the multiverse Earth(because he was doing it canonically that’s the kinda power one just call bullshit).

Yasura Nanami, the prodigy, she can copy, learn and improve any technique.

It’s the same reason I don’t read the second person novels. Is annoying to put effort on names and rearrange a entire paragraph on head just for the next one being more annoying lol. 😂

Hope this is just a typo I do hate Chinese fanfics, I can read a Chinese novel alright but fanfics is another thing altogether 🤣

1.7m-1.9m is being tall, 2m and forwards is being a Giant. Shaquille O'Neal is around 2.10m Hagrid from Harry Potter books is around 2.4m-2.5m Just to have a reference… 1.8m was alright.

20chapters and the story is just robotic, system that get people of others universes and make them slaves, thee story is just humiliating Issei with not actual plot… The MC don’t have a goal or a reason to exist, the System is the real MC and make this undesirable to read. Power ups are stupid an example is the Tori Tori no Mi and Mera Mera no Mi: MC ate both and that was unnecessary Tori Tori no Mi grant the user everything that the Mera Mera no Mi can do and more, eating the Mera Mera no Mi was really unnecessary he could have enchanted someone of his peerage or weapon with it.

Well Diochu could be a choice or Fou from fate Idk, even a guy will do just for variety and I’m not talking about harem, most powerful people on multiverse are guys. Just imagine having Dio on his team or Sukuna 🤣

Because devils created Caste System… Novility can’t lose reputation, Novility will never marry a plebeian without reason, etc…

Is not, everything right here is political so far the Gregory have a Satan on their side. But I doubt the author know the implications, so far he doing pretty dumbs choices.

The MC have no brain at all ok Tori Tori no Mi do what Mera Mera no mi do and more, why add the same kind of power again?

Why use something that will only give him the same power he already have?