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Just_Sayin13hKommentiertNice! adds to the fear factor of the thing/impostor concept well too. since the only thing scarier than knowing it's there and not being able to see it, is being able to see it in facade or true form.
(A/N: I decided to add the new impostor power that Innersloth announced a week ago, since it came in handy in a recent chapter I wrote where Suzaku goes on a killing spree. It's called vanish, and you can go check its details out on the auxiliary chapter, but in summary it makes him invisible for a few seconds.- Just_Sayin6dKommentiert
mc's realistic progress with his cheat that rewards effort and doesn't just give him a sharingan for eating noodles in some inane system quest is why im here.
[AN: I got a bunch of comments that I want to mention here, as multiple people upset that Yuta are weaker than Hikari and Itachi. First of all - I don't know how you even came to this conclusion. It is stated that Yuta decided to not go all-out on the exam as it will rise many questions of how he managed to grow so much stronger 'overnight'. He decide to not use his strongest cards - fuinjutsu and genjutsu, and only use weakened version of elemental ninjutsu, as that will be enough to get the promotion. He already grown his chakra level to the level of an average Jonin, considering the time he spend for it, it can be said that it's a great achievement and most shinobi don't even get to that level in their entire life. If you still think that Yuta is too weak, then I have nothing to say to you, other than that there is a lot of novels of wish-fulfilment genre where MC is strong from the start, but I'm trying here to progress the story in the most 'realistic' way I envision for it. ] - Just_Sayin28dKommentiertCh 172 [172] Wrecking Chaos and Rescuing My Goddess
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hydra would make good elixir ingredients
But now, Takumi has access to a Hydra on demand. A Hydra whose poison even Devil's fear. And whose regeneration is strong enough to regrow heads. Do you hear? That's the rumble of Alchemic Triumph. - Just_Sayin28dKommentiert
well he should go rogue for training at some point but he can always return to konoha in a space/time way if he wanted to.
After that Yuta said goodbye to his teammates and went home. It's evening and while Yuta was walking through the busy streets of Konoha and observes the people on the streets he thought, 'I'm getting used to this place, is it fine though? Or should I try to stay less attached to Konoha instead? I don't really have an answer to it right now...' - Just_Sayin29dKommentiert
whilst losing an arm would be a decent (if forced and overused) challenge to overcome, this was a stupid forced way to go about it. This story would've been far better without the attempt to copy Gildarts in literally every way possible. quirk was OP in a boring brute force way too. It was just OFA but written worse and mc didn't innovate or struggle with it at all. The original body owner is a stupid plot point aswell regardless of how you justify it in the future. Yes its great that the mc has a decent challenge to overcome but this wasn't an interesting way to go about it.
"Well, the only thing I can advise is to cut off his right arm. He'll use prosthetics instead." The doctor said. - Just_Sayin29dKommentiert
make it a mutation quirk. problem solved.
Kazuki glanced at Aizawa. 'Can he erase my quirk as well?' Kazuki had that thought for a while. 'The system gave me this quirk, but still doesn't the system have some kind of protective layer?' - Just_Sayin29dKommentiert
would've been better if you had just copy pasted the concept not the literal IP and yapped about fairy tail ngl.
"Kekeke." Kazuki had an excited smile on his face. 'Crush, a powerful magic from Fairy Tail, and now it's my quirk!' - Just_Sayin29dKommentiert
blud they in the mafia
My mother Akane Uchiku, and my father Furui Uchiku. The two of them are ordinary civilians. My father works at a construction company, while my mother is a housewife. - Just_Sayin29dKommentiert
pretty accurate interpretation of his character. he was still a good man. just ambitious and overconfident in what he thought he knew.
"Victory! Everyone!" Diavel raised his hand high. Although he couldn't obtain the rare item for the final blow, seeing a powerhouse like Arthur get it, there was nothing more to say. - Just_Sayin29dKommentiert
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Hey everyone, I'm back with an exciting new chapter! Something big is coming (and it's probably not what you're thinking 😏). Please support this novel with power stones and help us climb to the number one spot in the power rankings! - Just_Sayin30dKommentiertCh 19 Chapter 18 Lord Eilfang
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this would have been a legitimately interesting problem for mc to overcome. freebies make the mc boring.
As I shouted that in frustration, something hit my head. I rub my head and look at two things on the ground. I blink a little when I see a wooden container and what looks like a baby bottle. I pick up the paper sitting next to the baby bottle and read it.detailI Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be KingBücher und Literatur · Fangrove - Just_Sayin1mthKommentiert
weird power. no relevance to plot.
I take the paper and rip it apart. A second later, a rush of knowledge got inside my brain. The gift the Stranger gave to me was something I knew and something very useful. What the Stranger gives me is Minecraft Dimension.detailI Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be KingBücher und Literatur · Fangrove - Just_Sayin1mthKommentiert
nah, quite reasonable. if he could take AFO immediately it'd be boring.
If someone with the mentality of a gamer would look at his stats without proper knowledge of his system he would be called a 'Bozo', but it was different for Hairo who was quite proud by his development as his skills were actually full movesets so having Nezuko's Pyrokinesis meant he could do almost all her Fire related abilities. And after training for a year he was able to mimic Doma's cryokinesis which was still faulty as even if he were to freeze his blood and cells it would still have to color red unlike Doma's which was pure icy blue. - Just_Sayin1mthKommentiert
based. thought it was gonna get needlessly dragged out.
"And so I here by punish both Mr and Mrs Kibutsuji for Grade 5 Physical Abuse against their 5 year old son, thus they will be given 2 years of jail time with their son being given Mrs. Kibutsuji's father retired high rank hero Sorahiko Torino" - Just_Sayin1mthKommentiert
npc ah parents. leave. be a mature adult reincarnator.
But she was no saint as a after finding out I was quirkless she would hit me and punish me and would even make face me the wall with my arms up, she would even make me do EVERY chore in the house like it was some punishment it honestly felt like training due to the amount I was doing. - Just_Sayin1mthKommentiert
for a mature adult reincarnator 1 year of bullying as a 5 year old should be easily tolerable. now way bro goes full edgelord over someone stealing his lollipop etc.
Useless, worthless, pathetic.