ta buena, es un concepto interesante, esta bastante bien escrito, solo deicr que es un poco apresurado llegar y aprender haki, primero deberian dominar algunas tecnicas de rokushiki

holaa no he leído nada aún, entonces daré una reseña de 5 estrellas, pero necesito que me digas en que orden debo leer cada libro

soy un nuevo autor, y por ahora tengo en alta estima esta obra en desarrollo, díganme si les gusta :)

la temática es realmente interesante, pero la novela se torno innecesariamente complicada con un revuelco de información tipo geopolítica e información innecesaria, hablando muy poco de la experiencia del mc o su relación con yujiro entre otros aspectos que no se desarrollan en la historia en diferencia de toda esa información que es inútil en el proceso de volverse una bestia.

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Te extrañe 🥺

in fact he didn't see him kill a man, he just saw him say a word and then he saw a man die, which has nothing to do with

Epic

what kind of energy can shun handle?

Bien

What is the need?

If kenichi were added the fighting levels should equalize

Esta bien but the actions he did with artoria make no sense to his character of someone older and tired of life That is forced, he did it out of nowhere and without any real reason, there was nothing to justify those actions, I think that if you want to get closer to the girls, you should make them come closer by themselves

you can crossover many schools and put the characters and teachers you want. don't limit yourself

AAAAA I WANT MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE

it does not make sense the interaction between the teachers and ren felt too forced, why would I go looking for him? that does not fit with the character of the grandfather also where was miu could you have done exactly the same without having forced it, it simply does not make any sense that he went to look for him and that he also knocked him out

maybe it's his new pendragon blood, after all Artur being a hero used the holy power

I do not think that the lilibrllilibrl that the people in the chat have to be the original TO LOVE RU It should be the story or the life that the protagonist himself has lived in this life, he could also have cameos and it is also possible to make that story a source in order to see the future

the two and add Baki but you have to know well the fighting levels and the martial artists that exist

I like this story