Theo_Syafutra
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sigh , i don't care about aang but it's definitely unnecessary to be best friend to him all of sudden , and don't forget the MC in your story is always zan , not aang not sokka and definitely not zuko . Fanfic is to re-make the orignal to make your story unique not follow the original ,so yeah dissapointed
you did a good job author ,not great . characters development always welcome but you should do more conversation than this ,it's getting boring just with thought and explanation . the only decent conversation is between mc and the monkey . anyway your fanfic isn't that bad .