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Apple0726

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2019-05-15 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    Please, man... come back...

    Ch 7 Back to the Living
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    Volcanic Age Rising
    Anime und Comics · Auren02
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    Nice!

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    '"""""""""""
    Andere · White_Snake
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    Hiruzen is so easy to accept him as a Konoha's ninja... please, rewrite this chapter to give more sense... obviuosly, this is a humble advise.

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    '"""""""""""
    Andere · White_Snake
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    Please, don't stop!

    Ch 1 1.The Hero and the Flower
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    Stuffed into Snape
    Bücher und Literatur · creepycatisawesone
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    Cheer up man! I want to read and follow your story.

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    Fate/Despair, yet Hope
    Anime und Comics · The_Weaboo_Dragoon
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Verschickt

    I like this ff so far. The MC is 'completely' original, but the other character's personalities are very similar to the original story, except for Yang Xin; she is the unique problem of the story. I don't like her. However, the remainder is great.

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    Reborn as a Villain in Tales of Demons and Gods
    Anime und Comics · FanDaoist
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Antwortet auf CliffkunLolRekt

    I'm trying to improve my grammar before coming back, probably a Naruto Fanfic.

    Ch 10 Kuangyun's Demise
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    Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)
    Anime und Comics · Charan56
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    good job!

    Ch 10 Kuangyun's Demise
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    Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)
    Anime und Comics · Charan56
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Antwortet auf arkjum

    The idea is good, but the dialogues need a little more fluidity...

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    (REWRITE IN PROGRESS) High School DxD: Reign of the Emperor
    Anime und Comics · arkjum
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    I like the story so far...

    Ch 9 Will you be my friend?
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    Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)
    Anime und Comics · Charan56
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Antwortet auf Kazuyagami

    I'm Sorry... I have been disappointed before...

    Ch 90 Her Happiest Day
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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World
    Anime und Comics · Kazuyagami
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    dropped?

    Ch 90 Her Happiest Day
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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World
    Anime und Comics · Kazuyagami
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    Another Cliffhanger, eh?

    Ch 50 Shocked
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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    realistisch · Kazuyagami
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    si quieren apoyarme, pueden donarme piedras de poder aquí: https://***.webnovel.com/book/sasuke-return_13818171106500905

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    Sasuke: Sistema Hentai
    Anime und Comics · Apple0726
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Antwortet auf Seud

    I feel so... Please Author... No more clones...

    Both of them thought, {He only took three days to tame her, his skills are top notch!}
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    Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
    Bücher und Literatur · Wise_Snail
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    Welcome back!

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    Reincarnated into Tales of Demon and Gods as the Antagonist
    Bücher und Literatur · Denigrate_Demon
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    You are a monster Writer...sensei... I can only write one chapter per day...

    Ch 49 Moving On
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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    realistisch · Kazuyagami
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    Good chapter!

    Ch 44 Survival of The Fittest
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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    realistisch · Kazuyagami
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Kommentiert

    The story is great, but I think that a pause between MC and Honami is necessary to give depth to the story. However, thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 38 Confession
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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    realistisch · Kazuyagami
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  • Apple0726
    Apple07263yr
    Antwortet auf CliffkunLolRekt

    I'm not sure now... But, I think that this is the concept from the first chapter.

    Ch 3 Chapter 2: Dealing With Some Idiots
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    DxD: Dragon Emperor
    Anime und Comics · Kyle_Baron
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