StrangeLoopSleuth

lol

The premise and initial kingdom building aspects are really good, but it substantially devolves in quality in later chapters. The blatant racism is at least somewhat excusable early on due to the setting/time period but instead of settling down and fading into the background it just keeps ramping up. This is essentially a kingdom building novel where the development aspects are interesting and well handled that is handicapped by the original authors own biases and shifting focus.

Excellent fic! Very well done character development and world building diving deep into lore without being afraid to completely derail 'canon' events. Definitely my favorite cyberpunk fic

This story has frankly been borderline up until now, but I think this chapter places it firmly in bad territory.

all according to keikaku

pathetic effort overall

fine if you don't mind another idiot MC.

... to thank for that*

as one does