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I love the story the character and the world itself is good I love the pacing of the story and the cliche yet no cheesy romance between the characters. For me the pace was a bit slow but at the same time it doesn't matter since it goes really well in the story itself. Overall, this is a novel that worth to read!
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This kind of novel is quite common, but somehow, they manage to make it unique and avoid being too predictable. The characters are intriguing and well thought out, and the plot flows smoothly. While cliches are often expected in this type of story, the author presents them in a way that pleasantly surprised me as a reader. I highly recommend it if you're into this kind of story because it's really good.
I've read a lot of BL stories, and I think this one is pretty good. The romance is a bit typical, but the author manages to make it interesting. It's not overly mushy or cringy; there's a nice mix of romance and a cool fantasy element. Overall, it's a great job, and I hope the author keeps it up!
The story seems to have potential and features well-designed primary characters. However, there's room for improvement in terms of clarifying dialogue and further developing both the story and the world background to create a more immersive experience. With time and refinement, this story could become even more engaging. The author is also very good at creating scenario in story it makes the reader such as me to keep reading.
the story has a compelling and unique plot with fast-paced writing. It seems to excel in terms of story development and action but might benefit from additional character development and world-building the experience in reading this novel is really good. really recommended if you love action focused story with a unique MC.
the story provides an intriguing concept but lacks some depth in terms of character development and world background. It has the potential for an engaging story.