shreyas1

Very nice story……………………………………………………………….

Good storyline … nice characterisation … a good read so far

Although the starting story is common but the story develops nicely after… a good read with a little suspense..

Good storyline … so many grammatical mistakes make it look rushed…

Read 8 chapters….Story going nicely so far…

Great read… very well developed storyline

Nice characterisation … nice storyline … full of surprises … keeps you glued to the screen…..

So far the storyline is very captivating and the flow is good. Great plot👏👏👏

Kids are just awesome ❤️

Next chapter please