Jasonenrick
Did you hear about the kidnapping at school? #HolyJokerSquat #CornbringerSquat He had a good Dream ;) It was me, and I had a Dream about you liking my profile for no reason at all!
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Against the Dothraki that come on ships ? buddy, you haven't been playing attention 😂
ehmm, they already met Last chapter lol
I mean, it is a fanfic, so like 99% of them, they are very unrealistic, and the same happens here as well. Like I said, the author can write whatever he wants and bullshit his way through anything because he is well within his rights, but I feel weirded out when reading this. It just feels wrong. That said, good luck writing this, but this story needs some test readers before you post chapters. Good day :D
Correct me If I am wrong, and this may has been stated in the earlier chapters but you as well as I know that they were released quite a while ago, so I may have forgotten some things already. Isn't 10 the max? So If he has 20 Trick which is way beyond what one should be able to...is it because of this that he has the storing Ability If you say it is because of his Trick? Or ist ist just mandetory to get it at higher levels. I mean his mom is 9.3 I Think and John is 7.5 and can't do this. And wel....considering that she was unable to protect her children.....yeah
100%. An AI, like Chatgpt, always uses the same words to describe things. If words like " sprawling," " a mix of," " a testament, " etc, are there every time something is described....you know it is chatgpt. Also, the constant jumping from place to place is a big indicator. If that isn't enough, there are programs like Chatgpt, but there are other programs to identify if certain texts are made by Ai and I did it and guess what? :D
I mean, you told me more or less that I am correct, so.......
you believe what you believe bro
my Lord?
Not going to lie, but you either need to change his House, change his character, or rewrite the synopsis because Hufflepuff and schemer make zero sense. Also, if he is so super talented and obsessed with magic (I don't know because I haven't read it, but it sounds like it in the synopsis), then he needs to be in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin.
It sounds like it was written by an AI, which it probably was, and it doesn't have any depth to it. The character confuses me to no end because he changes his mood more than women change their clothes, and he's apparently ready to talk about what he can do. But in the end, he can't, because, like I said, it was probably written by the AI. And there are like 15 chapters in 5 months so there's that!